Thank you Adam, for your essay, which I read in the Library today. In order to develop further, do consider your opening paragraph - make it count. Do not repeat the information from the question but use it instead. By that I mean, explore the wider context - consider what you would expect to find. Well done for your systematic structure. And your analysis is impressive. It is important that we make perceptive contextual comments which you have done. Really show off your terminology. Revise your Lexis/Semantic change handouts - the examiner will be looking for this terminology in your response. Well done Adam - a successful essay - there is much promise here.
Thank you Adam, for your essay, which I read in the Library today. In order to develop further, do consider your opening paragraph - make it count. Do not repeat the information from the question but use it instead. By that I mean, explore the wider context - consider what you would expect to find.
ReplyDeleteWell done for your systematic structure. And your analysis is impressive. It is important that we make perceptive contextual comments which you have done. Really show off your terminology. Revise your Lexis/Semantic change handouts - the examiner will be looking for this terminology in your response.
Well done Adam - a successful essay - there is much promise here.